(Mr Smetherham) Adapted title slightly. Needs to make a plan for the process and consider evidence for claims.
(LFO) I need to think about what sources I'm using and how reliable and truthful they are. Need more content. Plan is a bit vague, needs to specify.
(LFO) Excellent opinions included. Very detailed bibliography and notes. Conclusion quite through. Think about another student understanding what you've said, in your conlcusion
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